From Draft to Masterpiece: Structuring the Ideal Essay
Grade Level: Sixth Grade
Subject: Language Arts
Duration: 1 Hour
Objective: By the end of the lesson, students will gain confidence in organizing their ideas and structuring essays effectively. They will understand the structure of an ideal essay, including the introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. They will identify key components of essay writing, such as hooks, thesis statements, topic sentences, supporting details, and conclusions. They will collaboratively build a sample essay using learned elements and revise for clarity and cohesiveness.
Materials
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Interactive whiteboard or chart paper
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Markers
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A pre-written, incomplete essay for discussion (sample provided below)
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Cards with pre-written essay components (e.g., hooks, thesis statements, topic sentences, supporting details, and conclusion ideas)
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A timer or stopwatch
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Handouts: Graphic organizer for essay structure (Introduction, Body, Conclusion)
Lesson Outline
Discussion Prompt (5 minutes):
Ask: Why is structure important in writing?
Ask: How do you think it helps readers understand your ideas?
Ask: Allow students to brainstorm answers and record key points on the board.
The Analogy: Essays as Houses (5 minutes):
Say: Essay writing is like building a house. The introduction is the foundation—it supports the essay and grabs attention. The body paragraphs are the rooms—where ideas live and are explained. The conclusion is the roof—bringing closure and protecting the house.
Do: Use a quick sketch on the board to visually represent the analogy.
Example Analysis (5 minutes):
Do: Display a pre-written, incomplete essay. Highlight missing or weak sections (e.g., a vague thesis, unrelated body paragraphs, or a missing conclusion).
Discuss: Ask students to point out flaws and discuss how structure could improve the essay.
Step 1: Group Brainstorm (10 minutes)
Do: Divide the Class into Groups. Assign each group a specific part of the essay to focus on:
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Group 1: Introduction (hook, background, thesis)
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Group 2: Body Paragraph 1 (topic sentence, evidence, transition)
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Group 3: Body Paragraph 2 (topic sentence, evidence, transition)
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Group 4: Conclusion (summary, significance, final thought)
Do: Provide resources. Distribute cards with pre-written ideas, such as hooks (“Imagine living in a world without books…”), thesis statements, or evidence (facts, statistics, or examples).
Say: Each group will brainstorm ideas for their assigned section, using the cards as prompts or inspiration. They’ll write their section together to make sure it matches up with the overall essay structure.
Step 2: Building the Essay Together (15 minutes)
Do: Have each group present their section, reading it aloud to the class.
Discuss: Guide students to refine and improve the essay as a class. For example:
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Is the hook engaging?
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Does the thesis clearly outline the essay's purpose?
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Are the body paragraphs cohesive and supported by evidence?
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Does the conclusion leave a strong impression?
Do: Act as a moderator, helping the essay flow logically and adhere to the discussed structure.
Step 3: Reflect and Revise (10 minutes)
Do: Display the completed essay on the board.
Discuss: Does the introduction effectively introduce the topic? Are the body paragraphs clear, connected, and well-supported? Does the conclusion tie the essay together?
Do: Make edits as a class to improve weak areas, emphasizing the importance of reviewing and revising work.
Think-Pair-Share Activity (5 minutes):
Ask: What part of essay writing do you find the easiest? The hardest? Why is understanding essay structure important, even beyond school?
Discuss: Have them discuss in pairs before sharing insights with the class.
Encouragement (5 minutes):
Do: Summarize the lesson with an encouraging note.
Say: Every great essay starts with a strong structure, just like every masterpiece is built step by step. With practice, organizing your thoughts will become a habit you can rely on.
Assessment
Do: Observe student involvement during group discussions and presentations. Evaluate how well students identify and incorporate essay structure elements during the collaborative activity.
Do: Use Think-Pair-Share insights to gauge individual understanding of the lesson.
Say: Create a diagram or flowchart of the essay structure, labeling each part with key components and transitions.
For Students Needing Support:
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Provide sentence stems for struggling writers (e.g., “The topic of this essay is…” or “One example that supports this idea is…”).
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Pair them with a peer mentor during group activities.
Written by Rachel Jones
Education World Contributor
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Where Did Foods Originate?
(Foods of the New World and Old World)
Subjects
Arts & Humanities
--Language Arts
Educational Technology
Science
--Agriculture
Social Studies
--Economics
--Geography
--History
----U.S. History
----World History
--Regions/Cultures
Grade
K-2
3-5
6-8
9-12
Advanced
Brief Description
Students explore how New World explorers helped change the Old World's diet (and vice versa).
Objectives
Students will
learn about changes that occurred in the New World and Old World as a result of early exploration.
use library and Internet sources to research food origins. (Older students only.)
create a bulletin-board map illustrating the many foods that were shared as a result of exploration.
Keywords
Columbus, explorers, origin, food, timeline, plants, map, New World, Old World, colonies, colonial, crops, media literacy, products, consumer
Materials Needed:
library and/or Internet access (older students only)
outline map of the world (You might print the map on a transparency; then use an overhead projector to project and trace a large outline map of the world onto white paper on a bulletin board.)
magazines (optional)
Lesson Plan
The early explorers to the Americas were exposed to many things they had never seen before. Besides strange people and animals, they were exposed to many foods that were unknown in the Old World. In this lesson, you might post an outline map of the continents on a bulletin board. Have students use library and/or Internet resources (provided below) to research some of the edible items the first explorers saw for the first time in the New World. On the bulletin board, draw an arrow from the New World (the Americas) to the Old World (Europe, Asia, Africa) and post around it drawings or images (from magazines or clip art) of products discovered in the New World and taken back to the Old World.
Soon, the explorers would introduce plants/foods from the Old World to the Americas. You might draw a second arrow on the board -- from the Old World to the New World -- and post appropriate drawings or images around it.
Adapt the Lesson for Younger Students
Younger students will not have the ability to research foods that originated in the New and Old World. You might adapt the lesson by sharing some of the food items in the Food Lists section below. Have students collect or draw pictures of those items for the bulletin board display.
Resources
In addition to library resources, students might use the following Internet sites as they research the geographic origins of some foods:
Curry, Spice, and All Things Nice: Food Origins
The Food Timeline
Native Foods of the Americas
A Harvest Gathered: Food in the New World
We Are What We Eat Timeline (Note: This resource is an archived resource; the original page is no longer live and updated.)
Food Lists Our research uncovered the Old and New World foods below. Students might find many of those and add them to the bulletin board display. Notice that some items appear on both lists -- beans, for example. There are many varieties of beans, some with New World origins and others with their origins in the Old World. In our research, we found sources that indicate onions originated in the New and sources that indicate onions originated in the Old World. Students might create a special question mark symbol to post next to any item for which contradictory sources can be found
Note: The Food Timeline is a resource that documents many Old World products. This resource sets up a number of contradictions. For example:
Many sources note that tomatoes originated in the New World; The Food Timeline indicates that tomatoes were introduced to the New World in 1781.
The Food Timeline indicates that strawberries and raspberries were available in the 1st century in Europe; other sources identify them as New World commodities.
Foods That Originated in the New World: artichokes, avocados, beans (kidney and lima), black walnuts, blueberries, cacao (cocoa/chocolate), cashews, cassava, chestnuts, corn (maize), crab apples, cranberries, gourds, hickory nuts, onions, papayas, peanuts, pecans, peppers (bell peppers, chili peppers), pineapples, plums, potatoes, pumpkins, raspberries, squash, strawberries, sunflowers, sweet potatoes, tobacco, tomatoes, turkey, vanilla, wild cherries, wild rice.
Foods That Originated in the Old World: apples, bananas, beans (some varieties), beets, broccoli, carrots, cattle (beef), cauliflower, celery, cheese, cherries, chickens, chickpeas, cinnamon, coffee, cows, cucumbers, eggplant, garlic, ginger, grapes, honey (honey bees), lemons, lettuce, limes, mangos, oats, okra, olives, onions, oranges, pasta, peaches, pears, peas, pigs, radishes, rice, sheep, spinach, tea, watermelon, wheat, yams.
Extension Activities
Home-school connection. Have students and their parents search their food cupboards at home; ask each student to bring in two food items whose origin can be traced to a specific place (foreign if possible, domestic if not). Labels from those products will be sufficient, especially if the products are in breakable containers. Place those labels/items around a world map; use yarn to connect each label to the location of its origin on the map.
Media literacy. Because students will research many sources, have them list the sources for the information they find about each food item. Have them place an asterisk or checkmark next to the food item each time they find that item in a different source. If students find a food in multiple sources, they might consider it "verified"; those foods they find in only one source might require additional research to verify.
Assessment
Invite students to agree or disagree with the following statement:The early explorers were surprised by many of the foods they saw in the New World.
Have students write a paragraph in support of their opinion.
Lesson Plan Source
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Submitted By
Gary Hopkins
National Standards
LANGUAGE ARTS: EnglishGRADES K - 12NL-ENG.K-12.2 Reading for UnderstandingNL-ENG.K-12.8 Developing Research SkillsNL-ENG.K-12.9 Multicultural UnderstandingNL-ENG.K-12.12 Applying Language Skills
SOCIAL SCIENCES: EconomicsGRADES K - 4NSS-EC.K-4.1 Productive ResourcesNSS-EC.K-4.6 Gain from TradeGRADES 5 - 8NSS-EC.5-8.1 Productive ResourcesNSS-EC.5-8.6 Gain from TradeGRADES 9 - 12NSS-EC.9-12.1 Productive ResourcesNSS-EC.9-12.6 Gain from Trade
SOCIAL SCIENCES: GeographyGRADES K - 12NSS-G.K-12.1 The World in Spatial TermsNSS-G.K-12.2 Places and Regions
SOCIAL SCIENCES: U.S. HistoryGRADES K - 4NSS-USH.K-4.1 Living and Working together in Families and Communities, Now and Long AgoNSS-USH.K-4.3 The History of the United States: Democratic Principles and Values and the People from Many Cultures Who Contributed to Its Cultural, Economic, and Political HeritageNSS-USH.K-4.4 The History of Peoples of Many Cultures Around the WorldGRADES 5 - 12NSS-USH.5-12.1 Era 1: Three Worlds Meet (Beginnings to 1620)NSS-USH.5-12.2 Era 2: Colonization and Settlement (1585-1763)NSS-WH.5-12.6 Global Expansion and Encounter, 1450-1770
TECHNOLOGYGRADES K - 12NT.K-12.1 Basic Operations and ConceptsNT.K-12.5 Technology Research Tools
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does not take pride in his/her work. We are working to help him/her feel good about what he/she accomplishes.
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